答案:
[第一处] ...I was praising ... praising→praised
[第二处] He says before…, says→said
[第三处]... make a great ... 去掉 a
[第四处] ... my classmate ... classmate→classmates
[第五处] ... as if I ... as→even
[第六处] ... anyone should learn ... anyone→everyone
[第七处] Heard what ... Heard→Hearing
[第八处] ... beat wild. wild→wildly
[第九处]... made my mind... made后加up
[第十处]... can makes... makes→make