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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每次错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　　　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Sunny　　　　　　31st, July

　　It was sunny today and I was in a good mood. Tired of studying or the noise of city life, I come to the ecology park to enjoy scenery and get relaxing in the afternoon.

　　While I arrived at the park, what came into its sight were the thick green trees. The air was fresh. In addition, I could clearly see a path around the pond. Lying on the grasses decorated with various flowers, I felt with ease because all that I wanted was peace inside.

　　Therefore, with time going by quickly, the sun was setting in the west. So I had to return back home. I would never forget such romantic experience, which was really beyond description.
答案与解析：

解析：

1．or → and 考查连词。这里表示包括两者在内的并列关系，不是选择关系。

2．come → came 考查时态。这里都是记叙过去发生过的事情，故用一般过去时。

3．relaxing → relaxed 考查非谓语动词。relaxing意为“让人放松的”；relaxed意为“感到放松的”。

4．While → When 考查引导状语从句的连词。while表示“在……期间”，后面不能接短暂性、休止性动词的过去是。when可以表示“在……的那一刻”，后可接“短暂性动词”。

5．its → my 考查代词的指代一致。

6．grasses → grass 考查名词性质。grass为不可数名词，the grass指草地。

7．考查介词。at ease意为“不拘束，自在”。

8．Therefore → However 考查连接性副词。这里与上文是转折关系。

9．去掉back。考查词义。return意为go back，所以后面的back多余了。

10．加上冠词a。考查冠词。experience意为“经历”时是可数名词，所以前面要加上a。